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i scribbled down this verse

or maybe it's the chorus

while having breakfast over at diner shores, earlier

but i need help completing it

ok ?

 

 

don't make a mistake

by tellin' a woman the truth (bass drum goes thud)

we say that's all we want

but if you do - you lose (hi-hat crash)

so take my advice

if you wanna be cool as ice

consider yourself forewarned

(then it slows down)

'cause hell hath no fury like a woman scorned

.. .. ..

blah blah blah (lost for words here)

no one knows that better than me

it seems to happen .. fre-quent-ly

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i scribbled down this verse

or maybe it's the chorus

while having breakfast over at diner shores, earlier

but i need help completing it

ok ?

don't make a mistake

by tellin' a woman the truth (bass drum goes thud)

we say that's all we want

but if you do - you lose (hi-hat crash)

so take my advice

if you wanna be cool as ice

consider yourself forewarned

(then it slows down)

'cause hell hath no fury like a woman scorned

.. .. ..

blah blah blah (lost for words here)

no one knows that better than me

it seems to happen .. fre-quent-ly

 

so I should just hang myself

from a freak-en-tree :wub:

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hell hath no fury like a woman scorned

 

So, I bent her over the bed

from behind I punched her head

I learned the Donkey from porn. I learned the Donkey from porn. :wub:

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he said he found jeebus,

and then he found me..

he only lasted 4 minutes

and I kissed a lady...

 

now I'll just hang myself

from that friggen tree

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then:

 

 

if you make a mistake

tell a woman a lie

we believe it every time

i don't know why

 

to avoid the dog house

be meek as a mouse

cause just as sure as you were born

hell hath no fury like a woman scorned

 

 

:dunno:

 

i need help

i thought there were some songwriters here

 

:P

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i need help

i thought there were some songwriters here

 

:P

 

You don't like handicapped dogs? :dunno:

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he said he found jeebus,

and then he found me..

he only lasted 4 minutes

and I kissed a lady...

 

now I'll just hang myself

from that friggen tree

 

 

 

ok .. ok

this has potential

you should work on this

seriously

i like it

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I didn't have time for his Jeebus theatrics...

Why is it that I end up focking geriatrics?

He paid for my limo, he even paid for my room...

He got an AARP discount, or so I assume.

 

Don't judge me my friends, for being a whoar..

Or for dating only guys born in 1944.

I would do it again, even if you think I'm looney...

Maybe next time I could fock Andy Rooney.

 

:dunno:

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I didn't have time for his Jeebus theatrics...

Why is it that I end up focking geriatrics?

He paid for my limo, he even paid for my room...

He got an AARP discount, or so I assume.

 

Don't judge me my friends, for being a whoar..

Or for dating only guys born in 1944.

I would do it again, even if you think I'm looney...

Maybe next time I could fock Andy Rooney.

 

:dunno:

 

 

 

:P

 

again

this has potential

 

needs 3 verses and a chorus

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i scribbled down this verse

or maybe it's the chorus

while having breakfast over at diner shores, earlier

but i need help completing it

ok ?

don't make a mistake

by tellin' a woman the truth (bass drum goes thud)

we say that's all we want

but if you do - you lose (hi-hat crash)

so take my advice

if you wanna be cool as ice

consider yourself forewarned

(then it slows down)

'cause hell hath no fury like a woman scorned

.. .. ..

blah blah blah (lost for words here)

no one knows that better than me

it seems to happen .. fre-quent-ly

I get on a DC-3 & a guy goes down on me

Then I get bold cuz I like em old

but he wants a 3 with another lady & me

So I guess he'll stay horned

'cause hell hath no fury like a woman scorned

:dunno:

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:(

 

 

 

again

i like where you're going nomad

it could be your own tune though

you could call it

siouxsie & me

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OMG, I am laughing so hard I am crying.

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20 minute drum solo....

 

 

then as the last cymbal crash fades away....

 

 

can size?

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Just like the Hound Of Hades

A woman's wrath throws us under the bus

We must aspire to tread carefully

And not rile her inner Cerberus

So coo, nod, try to accept it all

Say those words she longs to hear

Recall to get along, you go along

But that night you'll grin from ear to ear

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I'm prematurely grey,

but that's OK.

 

I like to date old men and their ilk,

who cares if their sperm looks like dried milk?

 

Do me wrong and I'll pull a gun,

then complain when you don't get the joke...(pause)...it was all in fun. :banana:

 

Yeah...Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned...

 

don't make a mistake

by tellin' a woman the truth (bass drum goes thud)

we say that's all we want

but if you do - you lose (hi-hat crash)

so take my advice

if you wanna be cool as ice

consider yourself forewarned

(then it slows down)

'cause hell hath no fury like a woman scorned

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This is gold right here!

 

--I've been living with a shadow over head

I've been sleeping with a cloud above my bed

I've been lonely for so long, trapped in the past i just cant seem to move on

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It's been a long road

 

Gettin from there to here

It's been a long time

But my time is finally here

 

And I can see my dreams come alive at night

I can touch the sky

And they're not gonna hold me down no more

No they're not gonna change my mind.

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You tell me you love me

nothing can come between us...

you tell me I'm all woman

except for my peemus...

 

now it's time to hang myself

from that friggen tree

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