TerrySilver 0 Posted February 14, 2007 so i was bored and wrote this, so if any of yous have some free time, was looking to hear some opinions about it. i know you guys are harsh, so who better to ask anywho, i hope it good and doesnt suck, but tell me if does or doesnt http://pretentioussoup.blogspot.com/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kutulu 1,552 Posted February 14, 2007 Not sure if it is funny, but it seems pretty focking long. Any part of it you want us to focus on? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TerrySilver 0 Posted February 14, 2007 not really. just wondering if its any good as a whole. sorry i didnt say it before, but yeah its kinda long Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Groundhog 24 Posted February 14, 2007 sorry, but this just isn't funny. It's harder to write a short blog post than a long one, because you have to spend more time editing it down to what you think are your best points. This feels like one long meandering post with no real direction, aside from the fact that it's chronological through the movie, which isn't enough. Also, swearing frequently in and of itself isn't funny. The f-word is like an exclamation point. Use a million of them and pretty soon they lose their shock value. also, find a new name for your blog. HTH Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Trip McNeely 0 Posted February 14, 2007 so i was bored and wrote this, so if any of yous have some free time, was looking to hear some opinions about it. i know you guys are harsh, so who better to ask anywho, i hope it good and doesnt suck, but tell me if does or doesnt http://pretentioussoup.blogspot.com/ Go kill yourself Curlynight Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Big Blue 06 195 Posted February 14, 2007 I'm torn between 2 opinions: 1. This is not funny 2. Go kill yourself You pick which one best suits you. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GettnHuge 1 Posted February 14, 2007 stopping aids in africa? don't wast your money Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
IndyTom 0 Posted February 14, 2007 I used less words on a thesis on whether or not Hamlet's ghost was good or bad. You want people to read your blog - keep it simple. Use the scroll rule: If I have to scroll to keep reading, then it's too long. You have a few days all rolled into one. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
p.man 7 Posted February 14, 2007 A little harsh. It's only a movie. The makers of the film are still making money off of it, which is what they set out to do. Mission accomplished. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cinciman7 2 Posted February 14, 2007 That was longer than a movie. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
